Richard has a beautiful composition and soundscape with this music. He asked if I might like to try an alternative lyrical approach. This led to a different melody arrangement and mix. It was a pleasure to hear the different stages and evolution and the mastery of a sound technician guiding the process. A very enjoyable experience to me and here's the resulting version that we are both very pleased to share. Enjoy ; ) !
From A lush Garden- © 2010 Richard Boase & Joice Marie
Intro : I'll give you pleasure
V1
Wake up your sleeping spirit, deep from underground
Moon light is falling, calling you out
We are deep sleep walking, not a soul around
Time for a sanctuary, keep us safe and sound
Ch1
Now we know there's connection as we lie down
Intro : I'll give you pleasure
V2
From a lush garden, fruit so ripe and fresh
Sweet as vanilla, sharp as lemon zest
Crouching like a tiger a tight coiled spring
Counting backwards until the zero stings
Ch2
Now we find the connection and sigh out loud
we know there's perfection waiting to be found
Intro
V3
Ex-changing passion, kisses, DNA
Written for all to see before flesh fades away
Out of the bloodshot sky, the pheonix flies,
and from the ashes and the embers of an ancient fire...
Ch3
Now we find the connection and I lay me down
And we know there's perfection waiting to be found