ASHLEY WHITE

My supervisor on my job said I too loudly over the phone. I followed her suggestion thus made massive improvement. You are singing too low. PLEASE RAISE YOUR VOICE people want to hear that wonderful angelic voice of yours. Don't be shy belt that song to the range God has given you. Years ago on a different I was waiting for the bus. This certain female was hateful & ugly vindictive mean. She told her the father of one of her kids that she was overjoyed that he went to jail for not paying his child support. If the US allowed corporal punishment she would gladly cane or whip that man. A certain man didn't know if a girl liked him. He had his problems to deal with. It is rumoured she was outside crying over him. Please be one of these women or both by doing so this song with some passion. Make me want to feel you are in pain. Make me feel you are offended then uptempo or different track.

Everything is great but I think something needs to be done to make your voice clearer. Try using a reverb get a preset to add some type of heaviness to the vocals, if you can pitch the track differently & mix the dry track[s] together to create a more popping mix. Maybe that'll work then record the instrumental tracks with vocals in a program like Pro Tools or Digital Performer.

I believe Wicked Creations to be correct in his statement regarding your lack of certain that could make this song shine. Check out magazines print or online like Recording, EQ, Remixmag.com & Electronic Musician for more information on how to better your sound. I like your vocals they are like a velvet. If you have a acapella or a plain vocal without instrumentals please hit my page. I like to remix this song. Your voice is a unique mixture of a woman & child combined. Almighty God really crafted something special in you. My prayer is that you achieve your goals.

Ashly White, I say you are bad, work it out and so on. I will add you to my favorites. I wish you well

hey i really like ur song u got a very great voice