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Take a Part of Me (Demo)
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Song Info
Genre
Rock Rock Unplugged
Charts
Peak #1,077
Peak in subgenre #12
Author
Thom Jennings, Dana Joy
Rights
2004
Uploaded
March 28, 2004
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MP3 4.0 MB 128 kbps 4:19
Story behind the song
This is a song Dana played to me a few years back and it stuck in my head. Upon the breakup of my marriage I modified the lyrics to reflect the emotions I was feeling at the time. The song still contains certain elements of Dana's first writing but my rendition is much more personalized. When I played it at open mike nights in Albion the small crowd seemed to enjoy it. I actually had one occasion where I played it to my ex and she was not too happy with it, which is strange because the version I played at the time was more reflective of my sadness than of the extreme bitterness that would come later. I changed the lyrics a year later to reflect my discontent but it changed the nature of the song from a lament about the end of a marriage, to a bitter commentary filled with hate. At the advice of a few people I changed them back. I still perform the song occasionaly but not with the raw emotion I did in the first year. I have attempted 3 times to capture a decent recording of it but still have never come up with one I truly like. This is one of the later versions.
Lyrics
We met one time on a solemn night A dark but moonlit sky You picked apart our married life I sat and wondered why Maybe it seems like never again will you be so lonely Even if it's for this night only Take a part of me with you when you go Don't forget the memories That we sowed When you wander away today. I hope that come tomorrow you'll see a different way The days go by the months go on The items still remain Peices of the life we made The love, the joy , the pain repalced in part by shattered dreams and promises that fade Why didn't you take a part of me with you when you know Should we meet again a solemn night a dark moonlit sky I'll hand you that flower with my heart inside then I'll ask you why.
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