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One More Try (Demo)
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Song Info
Genre
Rock Rock General
Charts
Peak #569
Peak in subgenre #133
Author
Brian Bartholow
Rights
2011 Brian Bartholow
Uploaded
August 09, 2011
Track Files
MP3
MP3 4.0 MB 128 kbps 4:22
Story behind the song
Being a big Bret Michaels Fan, I wanted to write something in his style. Thus, One More Try came to be. It's really a story of the rock and roller who has someone special at home, but can't stop living the rock and roll lifestyle even though he knows it hurts that loved one so much. It also deals with the denial of the rocker and how that affects the relationship.
Lyrics
As I lay down next to you my darling I feel your body cold as ice Was it something that I said now baby Turn and look me in these eyes You know it hurts me just to see you crying Let me help you dry those eyes What can I do to show you that I love you Without you near me I would die CHORUS: Let me take away the pain you're feelin' Let me wash away these lies Didn't mean to break your heart Girl forgive me, and give me one more try VERSE TWO: Didn't mean to forget your birthday honey I guess it must have slipped my mind I'll make it up to you when I get home Make love to you and watch the sun rise (TO CHORUS) (GUITAR SOLO) VERSE THREE: As I lay down next to you my darling Feel your heartbeat next to mine I promise not to break your heart again If you just give me one more try
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