Beat is Wordsmith by Vherbal http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandid=1265382 Couldn't download the track so I hijacked it :O Sorry Vherbal track was too beast. Basically a rough draft looking for critiques. Don't be afraid to be harsh.
Hip Hop
just using this to receive criticism on my audios.
Story behind the song
Heard the beat & started writing...
Lyrics
words flow at any cost slippin' off waterfalls rivers run red when lyrics are scrawled
drop verbal bombs out the sky when they detonate you sound alarms
rigged for maximum harm invade head straight for the farm
bullets swarm like bees take out the barn taking what's ours
haggard faces legs & arms battle scarred all we know is war
torn from the womb the day we were born that's when the hatred formed
insignia viking horns & the hammer of thor
worship viking lords follow norse lore
barbarian core close combat with swords
enemies flee when they hear us savages roar
fight while the rain pours drums beat thanking thor for the storm
lightning forks lighting up corpse after corpse sleipnir my horse
carry a torch riding with force swing axe with max torque
turning giants to dwarves send em straight to the morgue
rhymes travel like scourge strength iron forged
energy stored in hearts worn on sleeves with crowns of thorns
a beast unleashed from a hole the universe tore
spit that automatic massive damage vherbal rampage til u kant manage
menacing flow composed in codes so dope i cause skynet to short circuit when i'm writing poems
breaking bad smashing bones fighting these clones with my microphone faces get blown
on any stage a war zone recite torn tomes excite hormones i'm f*** ing you tonight like pornos
murder mere mortals for stealing morsels never feel remorseful
i'm abnormal f*** morals invade the matrix find the oracle & make her give me oral
that's not rhetorical just metaphorical like forks in roads
i'm hot torch the globe with ill flow twist your torso til your looking horrible
a monster escaped from a star portal
vherbal - wordsmith
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