I would've lowered the flute volume in the mix during the first section. I also might've raised your vox volume throughout the entire track up maybe one or two decibals... just a bit louder in the mix, cuz you're getting buried a little behind the instrumental. I like your execution of your lines... you enunciate very clearly, and it's easy to hear your lyrics. I liked the switch up... the transition was done well. Nice track! :)
I would've lowered the flute volume in the mix during the first section. I also might've raised your vox volume throughout the entire track up maybe one or two decibals... just a bit louder in the mix, cuz you're getting buried a little behind the instrumental. I like your execution of your lines... you enunciate very clearly, and it's easy to hear your lyrics. I liked the switch up... the transition was done well. Nice track! :)