Just a hardworking lyrical vet from the southside of the Chi.
JERRY VICIOUS!!!
OFFICIAL SINGLE FOR UPCOMING ALBUM "MOMENTARY LAPSE" IS HERE!!!
"CAN U FEEL ME" feat Curtis Lexx beat by Doncoda!!! Take a listen then show ya support by getting a dl at cdbaby.com/jerryvicious or iTunes.com/jerryvicious
ALBUM IN STORES NOW! PLEASE SHOW YA SUPPORT!
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Kid Low Key
Mar 25, 2009
nice fam!!! nice !!! if ya got time peep our new mixtape joint called "612s insane" thanks pimp 1
B-MIZE
Mar 24, 2009
wassup Pimp G,
amazing track bro, been checking your music out today! love the message you portray in your verse's - real talk ! i would love to do a collab track with you, when your not to busy ( But hey We All Have Work On Our Plates Right ) so check my stuff, and from there deside if you wanna go ahead and spit some real lyrics, Much Respect Bro, Keep Up The Great Work Peace!!1
P.s " I Love The Cover You Created For Community Service, Thats Crazy Man :) "
B-Mize
JC The Truth (NJ)
Mar 19, 2009
The beat started out hot... got me into the track and you didn't disappoint on the verse. Some of the SFX were Mono, and Lo-Res, and I wouldn't have used them... but I like how you're starting to mix more than just your voice, and trying new sh** . Love your flow on this track too boss, damn... you switched it up on me, lol.
I think you def needed to work on that hook though man. I would've went for a hook like the one you put down for... "This Is What I do". Something catchy and simple. I also would've faded out the track instead of just letting it stop at the end.
But overall... it was a strong idea you came up with and a solid verse to hold it together. Good sh** Pimp!
JC - The Truth
www.jcthetruth.com
Capo aka iHop Borders
Mar 19, 2009
DAMN!!
JR is right
you stay killin them tracks!
i gotta love this
the verse...oh man
nice subject matter btw
wish it could be a little longer though
id like to hear more!
Haul has a good idea, make the song longer, if you do, then maybe i can spit something for it?
ha
let me know
either way, keep making good music
God bless ya
You should finish this man..that Verse is crazy Ill Lyrical blow out your brain mineral hha Great Concept! Thx for the Feedback my man... Happy New Years and Let me Know when You Finished with them tracks.