Ok.
Good song. Its got a great melody, which is a bit over-used, but actually in a good way. I got an image of the departure, with the build-up of the song. The only complaint/something I would change is at the end of the song, you just leave the main melody, silence all other sounds to give the final push of the melody leaving. With what you have, it feels like the song should be going on for another couple of bars. Also I would add somewhat of a slow-down at the end with the main melody being the only thing playing. This is what I would do, but you don't have to follow what i said.
Ok. Good song. Its got a great melody, which is a bit over-used, but actually in a good way. I got an image of the departure, with the build-up of the song. The only complaint/something I would change is at the end of the song, you just leave the main melody, silence all other sounds to give the final push of the melody leaving. With what you have, it feels like the song should be going on for another couple of bars. Also I would add somewhat of a slow-down at the end with the main melody being the only thing playing. This is what I would do, but you don't have to follow what i said.